By Tom Thompson :)

Overall, I am happy with our test video. If we were to complete it again, I would make sure that the camera shots lasted longer (in duration), and that there were no jump cuts. The camera shots, in places, are not very steady, and so I would make sure that the tripod was secure and still. 

We did attempt to correct the jump cuts, by adding pictures and trimming as much of the shot as we could. This meant that the video was more fluent, (rather than jumpy)

We decided to add pictures, that we had taken in the previous lesson. They work well, as they add to the narrative of the story. 

We then added suspense (BOOM) sounds from iMovie, which add to the suspense of the film.